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My Lover Waits In Heaven- Poem by ~Soulefoin:iconSoulefoin:



My lover waits in heaven,
she watches from the clouds.
She is one great marvelous wolf,
she stands out from the crowd!

Her body shows her purity,
her great wings show her grace.
She’s held aloft by innocence,
and she has such a pretty face.

Her fur is that of silver,
accented with pure gold.
It is so full and plentiful,
she could never feel the cold.

Her eyes so clear and wondrous,
a truly royal blue.
She is an envy ‘mongst the wolves,
that I know is true.

She sleeps atop the softest cloud,
it was held out just for her.
She dreams only the sweetest dreams,
not meant for any cur.

She fills my heart with her love,
and I fill hers with mine.
The feeling is so wondrous,
it surely is a crime.

I am just a widower,
nowhere close to being pure.
I am in no way worthy for heaven,
or at least, I’m not so sure.

Regardless I can tell you now,
that I really know for sure,
that my lover waits in heaven,
for this lowly, dirty cur.
©2007-2009 ~Soulefoin
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Author's Comments

I was asked by friends to write another piece about wolves. I took it even further out of the box this time. Mind you, this piece took six hours of writing, listening to the radio and four full pages of scrapped poetry. I hope you enjoy it. :P

EDIT OF HIGH IMPORTANCE!: Celine dug up this poem in response to this one. Check it out! [link]

Edit: Spelling and a few words.

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:icontahlaera:
I love it, it just grabbed me. The imagery is great. Beautiful.

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Do not fear to be eccentric in opinion, for every opinion now accepted was once eccentric.
:iconsoulefoin:
Thank you.

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:iconkarynn:
Wow I really love this poem! It is so beautifully written!! +++
:iconprincessaliena:
I like how descriptive this is!! It builds a wonderful image of both wolves, the deceased and the widower. I'm pondering over the pattern a little... there's a lot of pronouns, which is a little too repetitive at points, though they help create a personal feel. I also like the change around in the last two stanzas. The change over of tone midway of the sixth stanza is abrupt and adds to the contrast.

Welldone! :+fav:! ^^

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:iconwolfbeauty:
Wow. I didn't know you wrote poetry about wolves. You're a natural poet for real!!

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:rose: Jesus :rose:
:star: Alicia Keys :star:
:bulletred: Jigsaw :bulletred:
and,
:heart: Ma to the damn D-E-A! :heart:


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:iconhowling00greywolf:
wows *envious of abilities at poem making*

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:icondragonoframpage:
that is...so beautiful (feels like writing some poetry right now)

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Bones: "Well, they gave me medication, so I feel how I imagine people of average intelligence feel all the time."
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:iconfeathereddragon:
aw, its so sweet!! I love it

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some say Follow your Heart
others say Think it Through
still some say Go with your Gut Feeling
but... what if your Heart says yes, your Mind says no and your Gut says FEED ME
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:icondragonheroes:
it's beautiful :D That I know for sure :love: it's so beautifully written! I enjoyed reading it!

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