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A leviathan of perfect form;
with life and greatness she was born.
Beneath her armored, cobalt scales
her tender heart within now wails.

Holy waters one would claim
had washed her soul of all to blame.
To holy waters now she came,
in hopes to never be the same.

The half-moon lights her silver eyes,
and holds its beams there as she cries.
She is repenting for the sins she's done,
that have damned the love she had for one.

An angel since her day of birth;
her heart now lay upon the earth,
with sin she never meant to make,
that stains her soul and makes it ache.

The rich plates that had formed her hide,
had turned to silk beneath the tide.
She held her stance; you know she tried
to hold her ground; that widowed bride.

Her tears still burned and blurred her sight
but what she saw she knew burned bright.
Beneath the cooling waves of light,
her heart quenched had then stopped to fight.

There she made her solemn rites,
and left that holy pool of light.
Across the tides she now resides
and feels her lover by her side.
©2008-2009 ~Soulefoin
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It's time I posted something, so here I go! HURRAH!

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:iconfeathereddragon:
beautiful I love it

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some say Follow your Heart
others say Think it Through
still some say Go with your Gut Feeling
but... what if your Heart says yes, your Mind says no and your Gut says FEED ME
then what do I do? :confused: [said by FeaDra 08]
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HUZZAH!

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OK, I think we all know what clubs I'm in. :heart:

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My anti-drug. Who needs icky drugs when beautiful boys are doing things?

Vous, je vous aime.
:icontigerwithwings:
u have way wit words!
a must :+fav: for me!

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If you can't see the bright side of life, polish the dull side.
:star: :damphyr: :star: :damphyr: :star:
Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel is just a freight train coming your way.
:iconnycterisa:
I can't quite claim to understand what is going on, though it's pretty and fills the mind with neat imagery.

I don't understand this line

Holy waters one would claim
had washed her soul of all to blame.
To holy waters now she came,
in hopes to never be the same.


But I especially like this line:
The half-moon lights her silver eyes,
and holds its beams there as she cries.

and
The rich plates that had formed her hide,
had turned to silk beneath the tide.


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> "No task is so humble that it does not offer an outlet for individuality." -William Feather | The Christian life is a long obedience in the same direction. - Peterson <

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